JemezFoodPeople
Chatterbox
USA
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Posted - 12/10/2005 : 12:01:32 PM
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Hey I did a quick edit & EQ of your song to make it a bit easier to hear (the bass parts really masked the left hand part) - check it out
http://s62.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=26L40W1ZEY89D2ZBYIG3E1ZRFO
Overall, I think it's a good effort. Like most tapping songs (including my own, sadly), it gets a bit repetitive. Billy McLaughlin is the only tapper I know of who doesn't succumb to that.
I really like the higher part about 45 seconds in. It's nice and energetic. |
"Do you have the patience to wait till your mud settles and the water is clear? Can you remain unmoving till the right action arises by itself?" -Lao Tzu, Tao Te Ching
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Hopeful Rolling Waves
Alien Abductee
South Sandwich Islands
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Posted - 12/11/2005 : 7:46:29 PM
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It sounds like your bass line is a bit sharp too, machine tune if you must. Tapping does get pretty boring if you don't move around to different ideas fairly quickly, e.g. Kaki King, Preston Reed, Matt Winn.
Overall, I think it's a good start, but it's just a skeleton of a song. Keep playing!
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